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That was beautifully written.

It brought tears to my eyes.

The part where they made love was as a dream

and the storyteller talked to the goddess.

I'm surprised that nobody else picked up on that.

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Thank you.

You've just completed the Overture. The Story proper starts in the following chapters, being Part I, which in the book is titled "Quest and Collapse."

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